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Fervent Ink Fiction Editing

Make your novel unputdownable

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Now taking bookings for June 2024!

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About Fervent Ink

I'm Jessica Ryn, a freelance editor and an agented published author with HarperCollins.

Having worked with best-selling and award-winning authors, both traditional and indie, I've learned the art and science of hooking your reader, forcing them to say 'just one more page'!

There's nothing more exciting than watching a story develop and flourish into a polished book, bringing joy to the world and pride to its author, which is why I set up Fervent Ink to help you achieve your publishing dreams.  


  • Developmental Editing in Practice (Liminal Pages)

  • Creative Writing MA with distinction (Canterbury Christ Church University)

  • Editing Romance (Club Ed)

  • Line Editing for Suspense (Louise Harnby)

  • Ongoing CPD: Essential Copy-editing, Essential Grammar, Proofreading PDFs, Working With Authors (The Publishing Training Centre)

I am a member of the Editorial Freelance Association, and the Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading. 

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What Fervent Ink Can Do For You

You've finished your draft! What's next?

Perhaps you've completed a draft of your story/novel and you need a professional to help you make your plot points, story structures and characters as strong as they can be. Or maybe your manuscript needs a line edit or a deep polish to get it ready for publication.  Whatever stage you're at, massive well done to you for completing your first draft. It's a huge accomplishment! 

Now comes the scary part: sharing your work.

Whether you're just starting out and hoping to sign with an agent/traditional publisher, or you're an established indie author, or you're looking to self-publish, you'll need your story to shine brightly for your readers.

I understand how important it is to trust your editor with your book-baby. I'll always be kind, constructive and honest as we work together to make your book the best it can be.

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Editing Services

Line/Copy Editing

  • Sentence flow/rhythm

  • Tone/voice consistency

  • Repetition avoidance 

  • Redundancy removal

  • Spelling, punctuation, grammar 

  • Accuracy

  • Narrative distance

  • Readability

  • Word choices 

  • Scene enhancement   

  • Emotional temperature/suspense 

Woman Writing

Developmental Editing

  • In-margin comments and full developmental editorial report

  • Character development

  • Story and scene structure

  • Plot holes 

  • Pacing

  • Narrative technique

  • Show not tell

  • Point of view 

  • Believability 

  • World building/setting

  • Emotional temperature 


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Fervent Ink: Testimonials

"Jess started beta reading for me in a personal capacity (we met because we share the same - marvellous - literary agent) but she's now become such a part of my writing process that I wouldn't dream of submitting to an editor before I've listened to Jess' advice. I've made positive changes to characters, plot, and even setting, following Jess' sage reading and gentle (but firm) steering. I wholeheartedly recommend her services, and this comes from someone who is about to glide effortlessly across a plot hole that is now a solid surface thanks to Jess' logical and imaginative answer to my (ranting and garbled) problem."

Anstey Harris: bestselling author of Richard & Judy pick, The Truths and Triumphs of Grace Atherton and Where We Belong.

How It All Works

Your book is precious to you. You've invested time and energy into the bones of your story and you want it to succeed. 

I want that for you too! As a published author, I understand the importance of having an editor who is on the same page (see what I did there?) 

I am a wide reader with eclectic taste and experience, but my particular specialties are:

  • Commercial fiction

  • Women's fiction

  • Up lit

  • Romance

  • Romantasy

  • Romcoms

  • Speculative fiction 

  • Thrillers 

​​If you'd like to know more about what Fervent Ink fiction editing has to offer, please do get in touch using the contact form at the bottom of the page, or email me at, and I'll get back to you to discuss your needs.

If you're interested in booking an edit, I'll ask you to send an overview of your book and some sample pages to help me gauge the depth and type of editing required, and I'll provide a personalised quote and a sample edit for you so you can see if my editing style works for you. 

Previous works and reviews can be viewed on my portfolio and testimonial page. 

Spaces fill up FAST, so do get in touch! I can't wait to hear your story.

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